“No steps on the snow”, some reviews

The book has many reviews, some are still in the Italian version and will be soon translated. The following are those already translated in English:

Review of  “No Steps on the Snow” by the Italian Literary Critic  Domenico Di Basilio         5 STARS

There are two schools of thought with regard to that period of history that we all know as the ’68.
Who remembers it knows it was a period of a thousand contradictions. Renewal, social revolution and emancipation of all those  intellectual new  that would become the norm, more or less, in the years to come. Who was not there relives them in stories and what is told, not always in an objective way for the truth, by the subjective sight in the eyes of those who lived them. It is precisely with this contrast that begins No Steps on the Snow of Daniela Alibrandi and immediately throws us into this vision. A father, Francesco, finds an old love flame on Facebook he had never forgotten even if not reciprocated by her at that time. A father who finds himself living in an age where he feels unadequate and only with the help of his son is able to manage sailing in the Internet…but it’s not only this.

There is an episode unresolved occurred in the “years of lead”, when boys and girls, also if considered revolutionary, tried to live their age amusing themselves, experiencing love and trying to change things. A homicide which had not been given a guilty, that had remained dormant since our protagonist relives the past. And he reminds those years with nostalgia and everything that goes along with it and with his old love, now a woman who falls powerfully in his present life. The pace at times changes so quickly as to leave no breath..calm, thoughtful and at once pressing and exciting. Indeed  a slice of life lived as a main plot pulls the strings of the narrative, but never too hidden, there is this aura of thriller that makes writing and, fortunately for us, reading the most exciting it could be. All seasoned with a soundtrack perfect for that period.

The striking thing that I always appreciate in any written, is the ability of the author to immerse the reader in the story and to make him imagine a background, a landscape and the situations described as if it were a scene from a movie. I say this with all the  possible admiration, but I think that  No Steps in the Snow by Daniela Alibrandi may very well be put in place as an Italian Thriller , a yellow intriguing that has all the elements to keep viewers glued to the screen, having done the same with readers.
I feel really to recommend it because there are many good books for luck, but good books that you’ll always  remember are more difficult to find…and this one will be not easily forgotten

Review of “No Steps On The Snow” by Bill Snyder from Julie’s Book Reviews                           5 STARS

Daniela Alibrandi is an accomplished writer with established credentials. In “No Steps on the Snow” she knows of what she writes – Rome, Italian men, marriage, infidelity, and Italian student riots.
The book is a psychological thriller written from the POV of Francesco, an Italian doctor, with a life that is the envy of any man who wants a loving wife, loving children and a loving mistress. But as many other men in mid-life he wants something more so he goes to the Internet in search of an old flame from his days as a student. Why with a perfect life like his would he seek out Milena? Passion. His marriage lacks it and he’s the primary reason. Milena has been the passion in his life. He was thwarted in his desire as a student because Milena was in love with a student revolutionary. Her lover was murdered the same night she was attacked by Nuccio, Franceso’s best friend, in a plot Francesco put together with Nuccio.
Francesco shows himself to be a loving husband and father manipulating his wife and children so that his life can be lived precisely the way he wants it. He wants Milena and he gets her to agree to meet for coffee. They begin a torrid affair that leads Francesco to consider giving everything up for life with the only woman he’s really loved. As a reader I found myself questioning if Francesco could love anyone with an ego as dominant as his. He orchestrates a Christmas family vacation as part of his marriage breakup so that they can be together to say farewell. Milena and Francesco come together but in the end their mutual passion leads to an unexpected end.
Ms. Alibrandi has written a multi-dimensional book narrated by an Italian male who is a master in the art of deception. The challenge he faces is how to avoid deceiving himself.
Bravo Ms. Alibrandi.

                   FROM AMAZON READERS

By Vagabond Vahn  4 STARS

January 27, 2016  

Format: Kindle Edition

Wow. This novels provides a multi-dimensional experience. I approach this novel and review as a man fascinated with languages and the hurdles forced by translating not only to another language, but to another culture. What I have to say is said from the perspective of an individual who has lived in another country, visited ten, has spoken a few languages through the course of his life; I write from the perspective of one who is not daunted by the act of translating the meaning of a sentence that despite being presented in English, was obviously written by a non-native speaker. This novel was written by an Italian author and I could tell while reading it that it was well composed – in it’s original language. I am providing a review that does not consider the burdens of translation to be detrimental – rather is setting that aside, and proceeding to review the story itself; and what a story it is.

The Good: I’m not big on romance novels. I am, however, big on psychological thrillers – this book claims to be both. So it was with a somewhat detached interest that I approached a novel that for all intents and purposes begins as a romance. Thankfully it is not a traditional romance – what kept me going was my fascination with the psychology behind the main character – a man named Francesco for whom infidelity is simply his natural state and he embraces it; a man who has mastered deception and yet does not utilize the skills out of malice or spite. He is perhaps a bit of a sociopath but not so far removed as to be unlikable as a protagonist. He loves his wife, he loves his family, and he loves leading his double life. As a man myself I cannot justify his actions, yet I also kept reading. Should infidelity in a main character be a problem for the reader, I recommend they continue to push through.

The ending is worth it.

The Bad: While it is not affecting the rating below, I need to re-stress: the translation into English is not ideal. It reads like it probably flows in a poetic way in it’s original language, but that something is lost in that translation between languages and cultures. I’m able to see past that to the heart of the story, but it may not be easy for some. Beyond that, the first 50% of the novel moves very slowly. It’s interesting in an almost voyeuristic way, peering into the life of Francesco from his early years to his indiscretions as an adult, but not enough to force you to keep turning the pages. It runs the risk of something else shiny popping up and taking your attention away from the book.

The Conclusion: The story is great, but I cannot in good conscience recommend this to an English speaker who is unfamiliar with translating the meaning of phrases between cultures that may have no equivalent. I can however recommend this to people who are in it for the story. I wish I had learned Italian and could read it as originally intended. There is so much I cannot say without ruining the ending, so let me leave it at this: I didn’t see it coming. If you’ve seen the movie Audition by Japanese director Takashi Miike, you know how easy it is to follow the flow of a story and then get hit with a brick in the face as the truth comes out. That happens in No Steps On The Snow, and was well worth my time.

                                                                                         ***

By Nancy Griffin 5 STARS

September 10, 2015

Excellent ! A great read right up to the last page! Would recommend to any mystery and suspense lover !
                            ***

By Heidi 4STARS

This must be one of the most difficult reviews I’ve had to write because I don’t like to criticise someone’s work but having said that there were parts that I really enjoyed and could really identify with.

Most identified with ♥

Francesco , who grew up as an only child and had to bear the loss of his parents alone , having lost my my mum I fully lived and felt his emotions …” to endure the terrible suffering of their loss, alone, with no one else to share with what I felt…”

” As always when I think back to my mother , I feel like I’m losing my breath for a moment and I feel an endless longing for her .”

The Story

Francesco is an oncologist and very smart actually so his “technology challenge” surprised me a bit lol. Anyhow , his son introduces him to the wonders or nightmares of the social network. He finds someone that belongs in his past but he never managed to let go. …

Now for the criticism…. I found it a little slow paced and it only started picking up at about 50% . The ending was great and moved my ★★★ rating to a ★★★★ . Received for honest review

“A Shadow On Merrimack River” The reviews

STRAIGHT FROM THE LIBRARY:

There is a shadow on Merrimack River– not only the shadow of the body that Diana sees under the ice, but also the shadow of evil that casts a pall over her life in the United States. Not accepted at school because of her foreignness, and at odds with her mother because of the mom’s new love interest, Diana’s only friend is Jenny–another outcast because of her weight.

The setting is that late 1960s and the author draws heavily on the time she spent in the same area when she was a girl about the same age as Diana. Her descriptions of the town, the cold, the school all ring clear as things she remembers experiencing.

Go on reading entering the following link:

http://straightfromlibrary.blogspot.it/2013/12/straight-reading-from-library-shadow-on.html

FROM AMAZON: 5 stars reviews!

December 9, 2013

Format: Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase
It has a great storyline and all the ingredients of a page-turning thriller with the suspense building chapter by chapter and then a totally unexpected surprise ending. I liked how we knew what the main character was thinking and feeling throughout and I had empathy for her. I also admired her courage in seeking out the truth even at risk to herself although I was scared for what might happen to her.
The translation could be a little smoother but that did not take away from understanding and enjoying the plot and character development. I didn’t want to put it down until I finished it! And now I’d like to read more!
Nancy Griffin

December 1, 2013

Format: Kindle Edition|Verified Purchase
I absolutely loved A Shadow on Merrimack River. It is definitely a page turner, and suspenseful throughout the story. The characters are well defined and the author’s attention to detail is amazing. A quick and wonderful read !
It’s Raining Books

March 21, 2014

Format: Kindle Edition

This thriller set in New Hampshire in the 1960s looks at one girl, her family, and the shadows of her life that are revealed. The author has done a wonderful job at portraying American life as seen through the eyes of a visitor to this country and the mystery behind the shadow on the Merrimack River is one that’s not easily solved by the reader.

The phrasing was a little hard to understand at times–it’s translated into English from Italian, and obviously by someone whose first language is not English. I would suggest that the author look for a translator who is American and is fluent in Italian for her next book, rather than an Italian who is fluent in English. I believe that would help with the ease of reading.

This issue did not reflect on my enjoyment of the book, however, and I look forward to the next book Ms. Alibrandi has for us.

Danelle Johns

January 2, 2014

Format: Kindle Edition
This book was a bit of a challenge at times {being translated from Italian}some phrases took me a bit to decipher. This did not take away from the main story. It is a tale of being treated as an outcast because of coming from another country, the way some shy away from people that are different. You become very connected to the character because of her treatment. The journey of finding a body within the water, adds the mystery. The building suspense and great character development leads to an unexpected ending.